Leila's First Blog

 


Agenda:Take-A-Minute

Blog Corrections

"Providing feedback to writing"

 Writer's Workshop

           

HW: RJ 16.4 Iready 20-40 minutes or Read/Revise novels

                           

                                                              Beginning of class:

We all walked into Ms. Nakada class and sat our stuff down, conversations then began to flow in the room while I got my agenda notebook out and began to write down the agenda for the day. I put away my notebook and sat and listen to the Take-a-Minute, then it was time for Tali to read us her blog corrections I then prayed that Ms. Nakada would forgot that today was gonna be my turn for the blog corrections, but of course I was wrong, So i got up and sat in the bloggers chair and waited for instructions from Ms. Nakada since this was my first ever blog.


                                                             Middle of class:

Ms. Nakada then went over the concept of "providing feedback to writing" we all then began the discussion on how we feel when people read our stories and how we react to the feedback, Many people felt that when we have friends read our stories instead of teachers or parents we feel more comfortable and less nervous of the feedback they would provide to us. Our conversation then began to wrap up and Ms. Nakada then announced it was time for the writers workshop, Everyone began to finish up their "NaNoWriMo Submissions."


                                                                End of class:

Everyone then packed up their belongings and waited for Ms. Nakada to dismiss us to our next period.


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